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I rate this 9.5/10! The story is great and just freaking loved the whole VN. Also I know that there will be side stories that may or may not be involved with the main characters and more so with the world building itself but is there gonna be a part about what happened after the clash with ____________? I mean, I don't know it feels like it ended abruptly. Flashforward and the bam the end. I can't explain it but that's my thought anyway. On the bright side like I said I love it non the less and I mean the size difference it just lovely as always. 

Hello sir Ari My name is ALEX I came to tell you About my brother who had cancer He died two weeks after the surgery Before my brother died he told me about you and the games you made You were the reason for making him happy when he was in a state of depression I just want to thank you for everything you've done You made him happy in his last days of his life I will never forget this and I thank you for everything you have done

absolute cinema all the way through this is one of the only storys to ever make me cry in a goodway

How much longer, man? I can't wait.🥺🥺

Omg ari i love your pfp im obsessed 😍

Hey, i like the vn so far! (im like on 5 minutes of reading it but whatever) but i noticed you wrote settl somewhere in the beggining- im pretty sure that you meanr settle..

How long will it take? I can't wait. I hope it will be finished soon.😘😘Come on, thanks for your hard work.

Hello again I want to confess something that I have been hiding for a long time I found out a while ago that I have cancer and my chances of survival are very small I just want to tell you that I enjoyed playing your games they made me feel better I just hope to live longer so that I can try the rest of your games in the future I hope so thank you for everything goodbye until next time

This keeps getting better & better & I can't wait for more

I really liked this one! The pacing can be a bit odd starting very fast then slowing down to a more casual pace. Then the ending was also pretty abrupt and, in my opinion, left quite a lot of drama within the story unresolved.

Knowing that there are bonus chapters to be added I really hope to see some kind of epilogue or slight time skip to explore some of the emotional rifts still left in the cast. As well as a few plot points that weren't explored. Especially involving the MC, Mar and his parents.

Overall a pretty solid read, with only minor spelling and grammar errors; very impressive for what I'm assuming is a first VN for a solo creator.

SPOILERS FOR THE END BELOW PLEASE READ THE VN FIRST

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This first point is a personal preference, but I'd love a content warning/skip option for the cheating scenes. I understand as a writing decision to have it move the plot forward and change the character dynamics. It is just I personally find that kind of explicit content uncomfortable. and would like a bit of a heads up before hand.

My second spoiler point reiterates  one of my earlier points; all the drama between  the Angel, Mar, and Damian love triangle feels completely unresolved and unexplored. They just go through a major tragic event together and the game ends with a scene of them cuddling. 

I've grown to really care for and want to see these characters happy, so to see all the tension involving the cast kind of swept under the rug to just time skip to a happy ending was a bit disappointing in my opinion.

Even with my minor criticisms towards the VN I really hope to see more! Definitely one of my top 5 VNs and I hope you can see my criticisms come out of a place of care and joy for the experience. :)

So when can other articles be published?I really like your work.Played more than 10 times!I hope to publish other chapters soon.Love you, my brother.😘😚

I am a Chinese.This is the best visual novel I've ever seen.Although the ending is a little fast.But I can think of some special articles more clearly.When exactly? My brother.

when I try to play the game ascending to the end they compatible what happened An I Love Play It

Are there more than 1 route yet?

Thank you for this it made me laugh and cry, truly an unforgettable story that I think everyone should experience. Funnily enough it was the first time I was able to use my second language for anything but a singular class I took in school; it made the whole story even funnier. 😊❤ Thank you again for creating this masterpiece, I am eagerly looking forward to the "fillers" 

Well, i'm a French guy and i really want to express my congratulation for your VN.

My english isn't accurate so, sorry for some mistakes i will do but i wanted to let a comment for your work.

I really love this VN, and this is the first time i'm really invested into a VN.

That was a beautiful experience, with beautifuls characters, and a great story. I really love each parts of this story, i'm happy for them.

Also, i'm looking for the last song we hear, when the MC remember the goods moments, i'm really love it but i don't find it  in the google drive.

Well, that's all, i'm waiting so much for others parts you will do.

Congratulation and all my love for Mar, Angel and Damian <3

I have a question for you, will there be a special story for the character xiao because I really hope that he gets his own story where he meets the person he falls in love with who will be the hero of the next story because I really hope for this because I love this huge brown panda even if it takes years I will wait until I get it ❤️ I hope to get an answer

Damn this VN is pure gold!!! I cried a lot last night, reading it non stop!! But it's still worth it to read this vn.

Thank you so much Ari for this masterpiece!! I LOVE IT!!😭🥰😽🫰💖

(Filipino Furry here!👋)

I would love to know about Spanish since Filipinos also have Spanish in some of our languages. But I'm still learning🥹

Essa vai ser minha história favorita pra sempre 🦦 ❤️‍🔥 🐻 

Obrigado Ari🌸

Just finished the story and omg It was amazing from beginning to end! The music and sound effects are great. The character sprites, facial expressions and drawn scenes are nice. Don't even get me started on the animated ones 😳. Whoo😮‍💨😵, that was just something else! I love all of the characters I think they're very well done! Lots of funny moments. Overall very immersive, interesting, fun and hornee story start to finish. Not to mention consistent updates ever since this game released😯 sheesh... Props for that🫡. I don't see anybody talk about that. Definitely a furry vn I think everyone should have as one of their favorites.

I love this VN even from chapter one, I even remember the first angel look before you remake him ... But, my heart can't accept that end... Damn you, you made me cry, like a lot, I cried like a damn night with that end... I really want to see them together and you did in the end. Please tell me it's not gonna end that way, my heart skip a beat to read that "The End". I love this VN, you make me feel that wheels of emotion. And thanks for your hard work, I can say, this VN the 2nd favorite of mine (sorry but adastra still number 1).

Новелла шикарная, было приятно читать, радует что в новелле много горячих и смешных CG артов/гифки, но жаль что нет галереи  чтобы можно их посмотреть вновь без сохранении

dude this is the shit, after reading and playing it damn i cried lol and thinking for like 4 hours staring into the ceiling, this is kinda the firtst vn i read that spoiler alert the mc and his partner are not in a same place for long time i just want to know is there like a different path only for angel and mc i reallly like really fall in love with his charm i wish i had a partner like him :crieeee, as i said again this is the shitttttt i recomend it 10 fingers ups lol, love it so muchhh~~~ i wish the author always have a comfy cold pillow to sleep every night

Esto es una joya maestra hasta me sorprende que esté gratis 😍 gracias

Unsure of how I have not seen this before, but I am excited to give it a shot.

Simply incredible from beginning to end. Mar might be my favorite protagonist in any VN so far, he's so cute and relatable!!

Lots of CGs and great world building, the sound design is so immersive and relaxing! A breath of fresh air in a saturated market of furry VNs and that's saying something!

Can't say much without spoilers but it definitely is worth checking out, you won't regret it! It melted my heart, made me laugh and cry! So many emotions...

Love this vn so much ❤️ and alss love Ari work!!

Que gran finaaaaaaal!! Me encantooooooo!!!! Ari porfa sigue así!!,fue una hermosa novela  próximamente te estaré apoyando en patreon,no estoy llorando se me metió algo a los ojos 😭,ojalá en un futuro alguna actualización mostrando que paso después 🥺

Meow,

I can say I will feel "saudades". I wanted to end with the panda guy. =^.~= or with all they three together. 

Still felt tense reading it.

But seen those big bear balls every time starting the story reminds me of some bears guys I fell in love years ago, more ones that visited my dreams 

Have a good Happy New Y-mas. 

Mewing, 

Pandrine

P.S.: Added a Mexican bull that I miss sometimes. 

SPOILER

ME ENCANTO, rece tentó para que los tres terminaran juntos. aaaaaa hora ya pregunte esto y mencionaste que al finalizar la novela después lo traducirías al español, me pregunto si trabajaras en las historias secundarias o en la traducción. 

saludos y abrazos de OSO.

Spoiler!!!

This was amazing, I had a slight suspicion that things would work out this way, but it was still amazing, I'm happy for them... Can I start begging for the sequel?

SPOILER

ARI, DID THEY DIE????

Guess I'll have wait until tomorrow to read this when I'm hopefully alone at home.