Heat Source

Hello again I want to confess something that I have been hiding for a long time I found out a while ago that I have cancer and my chances of survival are very small I just want to tell you that I enjoyed playing your games they made me feel better I just hope to live longer so that I can try the rest of your games in the future I hope so thank you for everything goodbye until next time

This keeps getting better & better & I can't wait for more

I really liked this one! The pacing can be a bit odd starting very fast then slowing down to a more casual pace. Then the ending was also pretty abrupt and, in my opinion, left quite a lot of drama within the story unresolved.

Knowing that there are bonus chapters to be added I really hope to see some kind of epilogue or slight time skip to explore some of the emotional rifts still left in the cast. As well as a few plot points that weren't explored. Especially involving the MC, Mar and his parents.

Overall a pretty solid read, with only minor spelling and grammar errors; very impressive for what I'm assuming is a first VN for a solo creator.

SPOILERS FOR THE END BELOW PLEASE READ THE VN FIRST

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This first point is a personal preference, but I'd love a content warning/skip option for the cheating scenes. I understand as a writing decision to have it move the plot forward and change the character dynamics. It is just I personally find that kind of explicit content uncomfortable. and would like a bit of a heads up before hand.

My second spoiler point reiterates  one of my earlier points; all the drama between  the Angel, Mar, and Damian love triangle feels completely unresolved and unexplored. They just go through a major tragic event together and the game ends with a scene of them cuddling. 

I've grown to really care for and want to see these characters happy, so to see all the tension involving the cast kind of swept under the rug to just time skip to a happy ending was a bit disappointing in my opinion.

Even with my minor criticisms towards the VN I really hope to see more! Definitely one of my top 5 VNs and I hope you can see my criticisms come out of a place of care and joy for the experience. :)