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OMG this VN is so good! Haha, I like Maёva's lullaby "Тили-тили-бом" 😈🎵🎶. Some jokes made me laugh at night, like MC's wet dream about Xiao.  Also I like the way how each of the relatives raised Xiao. (I enjoyed watching him get bullied 😋) I mean its funny tho and he is like "help me, Im big smart silly bear plush 😣))) 

I love the story!! but one question: how many love interest routes are there? is there one or more? because there are some characters that look too good to NOT date them! Or is those gonna be like side-stories?

Hello again sir Ari I just finished playing I must say I really enjoyed it and learned a lot of information Even I enjoyed the cooking part. I'm excited for the next update xiao Also a new question: Who is this hidden character? I have never seen it before

Grande ariii lo volvere a jugar jeje,me emocionó un monton la notificación de actualización se agradece mucho volveré a comentar cuando lo haga de nuevo 🤘😎😉

Woooow- the update was really good and helpful and AMAZING 🥰!!!!!im really interested about does helpful tips in the mini chapters im really excited for the next mini chapter updates 🤩🥰 i LOVEE ITT😍!! 

Whoo, whoo, how long will it take?🥺🥺

Hello again sir Ari it's me again ALEX I came to tell you that I have graduated from college I am now about to get married From my boyfriend  Xiao This is the best day of my life He kissed me in front of all the graduating students at the graduation ceremony His family was so happy for us I just want to thank you again for everything you have done for my little brother So I will continue to play your games just like my brother did I hope to talk to you next time I will wait for your new games in the future to try them

Hi, was wondering if this was available in any way on iOS, browser or not, since it’s tagged under “Phone Browser” in the filters, but not seeing any way to access it except via download. Thanks!

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I rate this 9.5/10! The story is great and just freaking loved the whole VN. Also I know that there will be side stories that may or may not be involved with the main characters and more so with the world building itself but is there gonna be a part about what happened after the clash with ____________? I mean, I don't know it feels like it ended abruptly. Flashforward and the bam the end. I can't explain it but that's my thought anyway. On the bright side like I said I love it non the less and I mean the size difference it just lovely as always. 

Hello sir Ari My name is ALEX I came to tell you About my brother who had cancer He died two weeks after the surgery Before my brother died he told me about you and the games you made You were the reason for making him happy when he was in a state of depression I just want to thank you for everything you've done You made him happy in his last days of his life I will never forget this and I thank you for everything you have done

absolute cinema all the way through this is one of the only storys to ever make me cry in a goodway

How much longer, man? I can't wait.🥺🥺

Omg ari i love your pfp im obsessed 😍

Hey, i like the vn so far! (im like on 5 minutes of reading it but whatever) but i noticed you wrote settl somewhere in the beggining- im pretty sure that you meanr settle..

How long will it take? I can't wait. I hope it will be finished soon.😘😘Come on, thanks for your hard work.

Hello again I want to confess something that I have been hiding for a long time I found out a while ago that I have cancer and my chances of survival are very small I just want to tell you that I enjoyed playing your games they made me feel better I just hope to live longer so that I can try the rest of your games in the future I hope so thank you for everything goodbye until next time

This keeps getting better & better & I can't wait for more

I really liked this one! The pacing can be a bit odd starting very fast then slowing down to a more casual pace. Then the ending was also pretty abrupt and, in my opinion, left quite a lot of drama within the story unresolved.

Knowing that there are bonus chapters to be added I really hope to see some kind of epilogue or slight time skip to explore some of the emotional rifts still left in the cast. As well as a few plot points that weren't explored. Especially involving the MC, Mar and his parents.

Overall a pretty solid read, with only minor spelling and grammar errors; very impressive for what I'm assuming is a first VN for a solo creator.

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This first point is a personal preference, but I'd love a content warning/skip option for the cheating scenes. I understand as a writing decision to have it move the plot forward and change the character dynamics. It is just I personally find that kind of explicit content uncomfortable. and would like a bit of a heads up before hand.

My second spoiler point reiterates  one of my earlier points; all the drama between  the Angel, Mar, and Damian love triangle feels completely unresolved and unexplored. They just go through a major tragic event together and the game ends with a scene of them cuddling. 

I've grown to really care for and want to see these characters happy, so to see all the tension involving the cast kind of swept under the rug to just time skip to a happy ending was a bit disappointing in my opinion.

Even with my minor criticisms towards the VN I really hope to see more! Definitely one of my top 5 VNs and I hope you can see my criticisms come out of a place of care and joy for the experience. :)