Yo! I'm so blind! Never saw that guy ! Xd always thought it was a dark door entrance xd
About translations, that of course is planned to be, I'll just need to complete the story until the final chapter, which I expect to be no longer than this 2024! 😅😅😅
Also sorry, I maybe delete this message within some time, 'cuz it could be some sort of spoiler 😅
Been waiting for this moment to finally happen. The relationship slowly sail into something bigger can't wait for the new update. Loving the juicy new content<3
That was so stressful, so glad Damian is being a friend and protector in all of this, while we're being hated by everyone for a job we sure as heck didn't want to do
hewooo currently having a delay ( I was very ill at the beginning of the month, still taking pills) but seems like the next build will be out by February 5th😅
And now, if you guys look there, you all will be able to see Xiao taking lessions from Elon Musk in how to completely destroy a business and burn it to the fuckin ground, clearly his objective, because it's exactly what he is doing here, the guy commiting so many work felonies I believe he thinks it's a bucket list.
Now, after all that venting, I must say that I will take no pity when all that comes crashing down on him : )
Mar believing Damian is straight is the most adorable thing. There no way in the universe that guy is straight.(well, I could be wrong, but not exactly expecting to be)
That was a really nice update, loved that first scene Ari, I was expecting a scene like that with a bear and a dog? Yup, but certainly not those two... A hybrid can dream 🥰, can't they?
Una pregunta, es que varias personas que conozco dicen querer jugar la vn pero no saben ingles y por eso queria saber si algun dia habra alguna version en español jajaj
hola Bro! Si quiero hacer la traducción pero es mucho trabajo en esta etapa. Verás, para hacer traducciones hay que volver a hacer línea por línea en el código cada vez que se hacen modificaciones y sale nuevo parche 😅 lo mejor es esperar a que salga la versión final (el capítulo final) y ahora sí hacer traducciones 😅😅
Pero! Hay un truco que me gusta aplicar para ver VNs que no están traducidas todavía: viendo la novela en PC , uso el celular con la app del traductor de Google, donde puedes activar la función de cámara para traducir en tiempo real! Espero te sirva! 🥰
Though angel is pretty sexy and handsome xiao is so cute and also big im starting to like(love) xiao even more hehe... Wish mar have more interactions with xiao in the future and maybe some...
OMG im so glad you liked my nickname hahaha. And yess I am and im really looking forward at fantasizing and seeing xiao nake... Ehem i mean seeing him more in the future updates <3
The heck with the cliffhangers! AAAAA! I JUST WANT TOO SEE WHO/WHAT THAT WAS!
The suspense during the last bit with Mar in the woods LITERALLY MADE ME SCARED WITH AND FOR MAR!
Super good storytelling, and really liked the dreaming bit with Xiao! Great job!
hello! Just checked out a few minutes that c. Ai thing and seems cool! Tho I don't quite get how can I get a description for you. I guess Angel is just a big guy, deep, compassionate voice, doctor, insipid cooker, I don't know what else hehehe🤪🙈😅
That is to be expected from a comment section, but saying anyway w<)
I confess that for some chapters I wanted to strangle both main characters multiple times, in specific in the beginning of their relantionship;
While thinking the moments they spent together were adorable I also kept wondering "When are they going to talk about their relationship?"
And then when the MC questioned if they were moving too quickly and Angel said he felt a sparkle I wanted to jump down at his throat.
I am not someone that believes in love at first sight. "Love at first sight" can be explained as in romantic attraction is something that can be triggered instantly much like sexual attraction or other reactions like fear and anger; but the attachment of love, only comes through work and a lot of time.
The feeling that comes from infatuation on one hand feels amazing and on the other hand it's as fragile as a strand of hair.
But the thing is, that is something that can actually happen. As in... Two people that believe in it can meet each other, and if the "spark" happens, they can very well start a relationship in the first few days. (Getting Anna flashbacks from Frozen-..)
What I personally use to judge how good a visual novel is to me is based on its realism, on the underlying rules of the world of the visual novel.
By which I mean, I know that anthro animals don't exist in real life, but it is a rule in the world of this story, so having walking and talking animals is realistic in this context.
What I'm getting at is that, it's not as if they declared to be boyfriends after the first sex scene, they slowly began to act more like boyfriends, only later on calling each other by cute names and stuff like that..~
It does feel like how it would go like when these type of people meet.
So, despite my, um... Homicidal urges, I really liked reading the visual novel!
Multiple times I laughed along out loud, I cried with the MC when he was telling Angel about what happened with his parents... And my god-
I think I had a romantic orgasm myself the second time they made love, it had no business being that good- o o)
So, I'm looking forward to new updates!
A side note, I do wonder if the speed of their relationship will be addressed more or be left like that. I should say that since love at first sight is a shot in the dark, there are cases in which you end up with someone highly compatible that eventually turns into true love; the chances are very small, but it can happen.
So I wouldn't really be disappointed if it wasn't addressed anymore. On the other hand... I would love if they actually realized that it was risk they took, talk about it, leading to character development and then continue their relationship from then, stronger than before!
But like I said, I don't really mind either way, I just want to keep on reading. w<)
wow! Definitely one of the greatest and detailed reviews! 🥰 It's a treasure to find these kind of comments!✨🙌
It's very fulfilling knowing this story can detonate all that feeling train! 💖💖(And just you wait for what's coming next😋)
Indeed, it's a very unusual love story process I guess 😅
You bet there's more coming up! Next build will have high quality sprites! (Gonna make a post about soon)
Greetings from Mexico, and sowy if you find some very dumb grammar mistakes 😅 Every build I find new ones to correct in the previous chapters. Still learning how to compose phrases and stuff 😅😅
Hehe and even with that, Damian's Spanish is kind of a slangy spanish from northern Mexico, but anyway, all non-english dialogues are not supposed to be super important(?) 😅 Like, it might also get understood just for the context 🤭 greetings from here to Brazil! I always feel like I understand a big part of portuguese too! (And would like to understand even more!🥰)
Damien is the best imo, his body type is perfect. If he ever got a route and was a bottom, that would be very very nice. But yeah looking forward to seeing how this keeps going 💪
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Yo! I'm so blind! Never saw that guy ! Xd always thought it was a dark door entrance xd
About translations, that of course is planned to be, I'll just need to complete the story until the final chapter, which I expect to be no longer than this 2024! 😅😅😅
Also sorry, I maybe delete this message within some time, 'cuz it could be some sort of spoiler 😅
I don't know why I only received the email of the new chapter now, but that's ok :)
Thanks Ari :) me gusta mucho usted (I don't have any idea if what I said was right)
That's a cute try 💖🥰🤭
Been waiting for this moment to finally happen. The relationship slowly sail into something bigger can't wait for the new update. Loving the juicy new content<3
🥰🥰🥰🥰💖💖💖💖🙌
OMG! New UPDATE!!!!!!!
yes yes yessss 🥰🥰🥰
That was so stressful, so glad Damian is being a friend and protector in all of this, while we're being hated by everyone for a job we sure as heck didn't want to do
Weather update:
Damian, I love you so much, my short king doggo ❤️❤️❤️
And I still find Xiao cool, even if he comes off as abrasive.
And literally, why did you have to plot twist us like that, Ari? Why the recon, why did he fire my favorite trio of all people? 😭😭
The reworks... 🥰
Literally love them all. So much. Damn, I miss playing this VN. I haven't been keeping up with it as of late.
uwuff 🥰🙌 new update coming up in about a week!
Ooh, can't wait! ☄️🤙🏿
Update?
hewooo currently having a delay ( I was very ill at the beginning of the month, still taking pills) but seems like the next build will be out by February 5th😅
Ooof, get well soon Ari
Thanks bro! 💖
this is one of my fav vn? I'm not sure if this is a vn or not anyways can't wait fot the next update.
Never fails to make me wet this Christmast until New Year.
很高興新的公開版本也有中文了
但遺憾的是並非由過去版本的Partt翻譯
這次的翻譯品質令人感到噁心
Yet another thrilling and intense chapter
Not exactly spoilers, but just to be safe
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And now, if you guys look there, you all will be able to see Xiao taking lessions from Elon Musk in how to completely destroy a business and burn it to the fuckin ground, clearly his objective, because it's exactly what he is doing here, the guy commiting so many work felonies I believe he thinks it's a bucket list.
Now, after all that venting, I must say that I will take no pity when all that comes crashing down on him : )
Mar believing Damian is straight is the most adorable thing. There no way in the universe that guy is straight.(well, I could be wrong, but not exactly expecting to be)
That was a really nice update, loved that first scene Ari, I was expecting a scene like that with a bear and a dog? Yup, but certainly not those two... A hybrid can dream 🥰, can't they?
cant wait for the next update :3
it's gonna be ready in less than two weeks!
can't wait >~<
its ready!!!!!!!uwuuwuw
ty for leting me know ima play it now '-'
Una pregunta, es que varias personas que conozco dicen querer jugar la vn pero no saben ingles y por eso queria saber si algun dia habra alguna version en español jajaj
hola Bro! Si quiero hacer la traducción pero es mucho trabajo en esta etapa. Verás, para hacer traducciones hay que volver a hacer línea por línea en el código cada vez que se hacen modificaciones y sale nuevo parche 😅 lo mejor es esperar a que salga la versión final (el capítulo final) y ahora sí hacer traducciones 😅😅
Pero! Hay un truco que me gusta aplicar para ver VNs que no están traducidas todavía: viendo la novela en PC , uso el celular con la app del traductor de Google, donde puedes activar la función de cámara para traducir en tiempo real! Espero te sirva! 🥰
Vale vale entiendo, supongo que tendre que esperar unos meses para eso, gracias por responder igual y haré eso cuando la instale! 😄
I can't wait for the next chapter :3 , and angel is such a hansome sweet beaw :3
its here!!!!!!!!!!!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I MISSED THE UPDATE!!! HURRY PREPARE THE COCOS, THE BLANKETS, TIME TO READ THE THINGS I COULD'NT DURING THE EXAMS!!!!!!!!!!
More like prepare the nails you're gonna bite 🙈🤭😘💖
Happy post exams time bro!
Just realized I havent replied yet, sorry haha
I LOVED THIS UPDATE, thank you so much for the Xiao crumbs hehehehehhe
if it's ok, can I draw him and me in wholesome (and hole-some wink wink) situations?
Don't worry!
And Totally! Go on ;9😘🙈🥰🤭💖✨💦🤪
Hi mr. Ari guardian
I really love the update
Though angel is pretty sexy and handsome xiao is so cute and also big im starting to like(love) xiao even more hehe... Wish mar have more interactions with xiao in the future and maybe some...
Anyway, thankyou so much for the update.
Cant wait for the next update <3
OMG your name 🙈💖 seems like you're really a fan of Xiao! We'll see in the future what else Xiao has for us 😚
OMG im so glad you liked my nickname hahaha. And yess I am and im really looking forward at fantasizing and seeing xiao nake... Ehem i mean seeing him more in the future updates <3
🤭🤭🤭🥰🥰🥰🥰
You weren't kidding when you said it was a spoopy chapter, felt like I was playing Alien Isolation for a moment with the whole radar thingy ;_;
I'm eager to see what the MC stumbled upon owo
yikes! sowy for the goose bumps! I hope it was exciting in the end uwuwuwu 😅
Ahh what an interesting chapter! I kind of know what MC is going find out.
I knew Xiao is really hot but shirtless is even hotter. Man, I like this guy despite being an a*shole.
I hope his demeanor changes in the future.
ARIIIII >:(
(spoilers)
The heck with the cliffhangers! AAAAA! I JUST WANT TOO SEE WHO/WHAT THAT WAS! The suspense during the last bit with Mar in the woods LITERALLY MADE ME SCARED WITH AND FOR MAR! Super good storytelling, and really liked the dreaming bit with Xiao! Great job!
just in time for october i guess 😅🤭 It's heart warming reading these comments 💖😜
Let's gooo 🐻🦦 🐼
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
sowy was busy as fudge 😅
love the game so far. ONE OF THE BEST VN THAT I EVER READ!!
Is there a solid schedule for the update? *dying for the next update :"")
Currently bimonthly 😉
Thanks for your kind words!! 💖🤩🙏
感謝Parrt的中文翻譯，也感謝製作團隊的努力創作
🙏🙇🥰💖✨🙌💖💖🥰
How the heck did xou manage to make Angel even hotter!? "O///O xou did an amazing job with the sprite revamp ^^_
hhehhe yikes! 😅 Thank you ! You're so sweet! 🫡💖🤭✨✨
Dayum the update is freaking update I can't wait the next one
ASSDGHASSDFGHAG UWUUUU🙌💖🐳💦✨💦✨
heee heeee heeeeee, A new updae to quench my ungodly thirst >:3
thank you Ari ^^ may both sides of your pillows be cool and comfortable forever
sweetiee!🥰
I can't wait to know more about Damián ˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶
:'*
Same!!!! I love Damian and also I feel about him
Thank you for keeping always update ^^
i love this game so much >w<
💖💖❤️❤️
😋🙌🐳💦✨💦✨💦✨🙈💖🥰
Soooooo swee, please get more❤❤❤❤
Coming up within about a week 😅🥰🙌
I want Angel to be on C.AI, is there a way to get Angel's description queen?
hello! Just checked out a few minutes that c. Ai thing and seems cool! Tho I don't quite get how can I get a description for you. I guess Angel is just a big guy, deep, compassionate voice, doctor, insipid cooker, I don't know what else hehehe🤪🙈😅
Thanks queen!!! Never stop slaying!!!
😋👑💅💅💅
the sprite updates look really good haha, your art has improved sm
UWUFFF!!!🥰🥰🥰🥰
I require an update to live
it's gonna be worth the wait I promise 😭😭🥺🥺 I just need less than a month to complete all revamped sprites 🙏🙏
Man im already dead
Nooo don't die buddy
no offence
That image is the 2nd most rancid, vile, MONSTEROUS image I've ever seen
1st place goes to meowbah
(JOKE)
Jsjsjsjs🤭
Os detalhes nos pelos do Damian estão muito legais e o Angel está ainda mais fofinho, eu achava que isso nem era possível kkk.
Ótimo trabalho 🫶
PS:Eu tô ficando louco ou o "amigo" do Angel tá maior?
It's a possibility🤭🤭
He's the biggest boy in these mountains after all 🐳🐳🙌😋😋✨💖💖💖
Quanto maior melhor né kkk
Você pensa em adicionar seu próprio personagem no seu próprio jogo?🤔
Turbo spoiler alert. Yes but just casually and in a quick, non significant scene maybe
Fire up, Ari. We will be happy to wait for this grand update! ||wo)/
The main thing is not to push yourself and do it with pleasure. >w<
Buenos días :ь
Buenos!!
Spoiler alert, this is an after story comment!
(A long text too)
That is to be expected from a comment section, but saying anyway w<)
I confess that for some chapters I wanted to strangle both main characters multiple times, in specific in the beginning of their relantionship;
While thinking the moments they spent together were adorable I also kept wondering "When are they going to talk about their relationship?"
And then when the MC questioned if they were moving too quickly and Angel said he felt a sparkle I wanted to jump down at his throat.
I am not someone that believes in love at first sight. "Love at first sight" can be explained as in romantic attraction is something that can be triggered instantly much like sexual attraction or other reactions like fear and anger; but the attachment of love, only comes through work and a lot of time.
The feeling that comes from infatuation on one hand feels amazing and on the other hand it's as fragile as a strand of hair.
But the thing is, that is something that can actually happen. As in... Two people that believe in it can meet each other, and if the "spark" happens, they can very well start a relationship in the first few days. (Getting Anna flashbacks from Frozen-..)
What I personally use to judge how good a visual novel is to me is based on its realism, on the underlying rules of the world of the visual novel.
By which I mean, I know that anthro animals don't exist in real life, but it is a rule in the world of this story, so having walking and talking animals is realistic in this context.
What I'm getting at is that, it's not as if they declared to be boyfriends after the first sex scene, they slowly began to act more like boyfriends, only later on calling each other by cute names and stuff like that..~
It does feel like how it would go like when these type of people meet.
So, despite my, um... Homicidal urges, I really liked reading the visual novel!
Multiple times I laughed along out loud, I cried with the MC when he was telling Angel about what happened with his parents... And my god-
I think I had a romantic orgasm myself the second time they made love, it had no business being that good- o o)
So, I'm looking forward to new updates!
A side note, I do wonder if the speed of their relationship will be addressed more or be left like that. I should say that since love at first sight is a shot in the dark, there are cases in which you end up with someone highly compatible that eventually turns into true love; the chances are very small, but it can happen.
So I wouldn't really be disappointed if it wasn't addressed anymore. On the other hand... I would love if they actually realized that it was risk they took, talk about it, leading to character development and then continue their relationship from then, stronger than before!
But like I said, I don't really mind either way, I just want to keep on reading. w<)
Thank you!! w^)/
wow! Definitely one of the greatest and detailed reviews! 🥰 It's a treasure to find these kind of comments!✨🙌
It's very fulfilling knowing this story can detonate all that feeling train! 💖💖(And just you wait for what's coming next😋)
Indeed, it's a very unusual love story process I guess 😅
You bet there's more coming up! Next build will have high quality sprites! (Gonna make a post about soon)
Greetings from Mexico, and sowy if you find some very dumb grammar mistakes 😅 Every build I find new ones to correct in the previous chapters. Still learning how to compose phrases and stuff 😅😅
Wish you a horny day buddy! 🥰🔥😋🙌
Thank you! I'm feeling excited already- wo)
Oo, greetings from Brazil! ^)/
Brazilian Portuguese is very similar to spanish, so everytime a character spoke in spanish I still understood like 95% of what they were saying;
Funny how I had this exact thought around the third time:
"Americans are not going to understand a single word of what they're saying, are they? w<)"
If you did made any mistakes, then at least I didn't notice, so they probably weren't that serious!
You too~! •w-)
Hehe and even with that, Damian's Spanish is kind of a slangy spanish from northern Mexico, but anyway, all non-english dialogues are not supposed to be super important(?) 😅 Like, it might also get understood just for the context 🤭 greetings from here to Brazil! I always feel like I understand a big part of portuguese too! (And would like to understand even more!🥰)
I wonder if we can somehow tame xiao into a big softie since he might be a tsundere type.. XD
JAJAJAJAJAJAJJA
Only time will show 🤔
Damien is the best imo, his body type is perfect. If he ever got a route and was a bottom, that would be very very nice. But yeah looking forward to seeing how this keeps going 💪
mmmmmm Damian as bottom....😋💦💦💦
Hahaha I'm definitely not biased, but I agree 100% 🤭 💦