Hello again I want to confess something that I have been hiding for a long time I found out a while ago that I have cancer and my chances of survival are very small I just want to tell you that I enjoyed playing your games they made me feel better I just hope to live longer so that I can try the rest of your games in the future I hope so thank you for everything goodbye until next time
I really liked this one! The pacing can be a bit odd starting very fast then slowing down to a more casual pace. Then the ending was also pretty abrupt and, in my opinion, left quite a lot of drama within the story unresolved.
Knowing that there are bonus chapters to be added I really hope to see some kind of epilogue or slight time skip to explore some of the emotional rifts still left in the cast. As well as a few plot points that weren't explored. Especially involving the MC, Mar and his parents.
Overall a pretty solid read, with only minor spelling and grammar errors; very impressive for what I'm assuming is a first VN for a solo creator.
SPOILERS FOR THE END BELOW PLEASE READ THE VN FIRST
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This first point is a personal preference, but I'd love a content warning/skip option for the cheating scenes. I understand as a writing decision to have it move the plot forward and change the character dynamics. It is just I personally find that kind of explicit content uncomfortable. and would like a bit of a heads up before hand.
My second spoiler point reiterates one of my earlier points; all the drama between the Angel, Mar, and Damian love triangle feels completely unresolved and unexplored. They just go through a major tragic event together and the game ends with a scene of them cuddling.
I've grown to really care for and want to see these characters happy, so to see all the tension involving the cast kind of swept under the rug to just time skip to a happy ending was a bit disappointing in my opinion.
Even with my minor criticisms towards the VN I really hope to see more! Definitely one of my top 5 VNs and I hope you can see my criticisms come out of a place of care and joy for the experience. :)
i hope in the future i can bring more quality stories❤️🔥Thanks for your feedback, it really means a lot to me that you take time to write all that!🥂🙏❤️🔥
So when can other articles be published?I really like your work.Played more than 10 times!I hope to publish other chapters soon.Love you, my brother.😘😚
These next few weeks will be working on a silly mini chapter. It's not gonna be a big thing, but I'll put my heart on it💖 that's what's currently scheduled.
I am a Chinese.This is the best visual novel I've ever seen.Although the ending is a little fast.But I can think of some special articles more clearly.When exactly? My brother.
Loved the story up until the end. I think the end could have been clearer. I thought something very bad happened until I read posts here saying otherwise.
I try to change See If there any updates so I can update the game but when I didn't see it didn't have any and when I try to play it wouldn't let me cuz shows Mac no updates for Mac game file Show No Mac File Other than that I love the game
Thank you for this it made me laugh and cry, truly an unforgettable story that I think everyone should experience. Funnily enough it was the first time I was able to use my second language for anything but a singular class I took in school; it made the whole story even funnier. 😊❤ Thank you again for creating this masterpiece, I am eagerly looking forward to the "fillers"
Sorry for the wait! The file is now on the link to songs and is called "Mazapil". the thing is.. I'm not even sure if this song is royalty free 😅 I downloaded that song from a very old video from youtube that disappeared. it was some sort of a tour video from a place called Mazapil. but never find the original source of the song 😅
I have a question for you, will there be a special story for the character xiao because I really hope that he gets his own story where he meets the person he falls in love with who will be the hero of the next story because I really hope for this because I love this huge brown panda even if it takes years I will wait until I get it ❤️ I hope to get an answer
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How long will it take? I can't wait. I hope it will be finished soon.😘😘Come on, thanks for your hard work.
Eh... 😅Sorry I was sick for literally an entire month😵 this one might take some more while...🤧
Oh, my God, what's going on? Is your condition all right? I hope you feel better soon. Then take a good rest and don't worry.
Don't worry, take a little time to cultivate yourself.😊😊I wish you get better and better.
Thanks!now on April I have been feeling so much better!
Hello again I want to confess something that I have been hiding for a long time I found out a while ago that I have cancer and my chances of survival are very small I just want to tell you that I enjoyed playing your games they made me feel better I just hope to live longer so that I can try the rest of your games in the future I hope so thank you for everything goodbye until next time
Aww bro I'm sorry to hear that😔I hope for the best of scenarios🙏🙏🙏
and thanks a lot for your kind words 😽
This keeps getting better & better & I can't wait for more
💪🙌🥂🥰
I really liked this one! The pacing can be a bit odd starting very fast then slowing down to a more casual pace. Then the ending was also pretty abrupt and, in my opinion, left quite a lot of drama within the story unresolved.
Knowing that there are bonus chapters to be added I really hope to see some kind of epilogue or slight time skip to explore some of the emotional rifts still left in the cast. As well as a few plot points that weren't explored. Especially involving the MC, Mar and his parents.
Overall a pretty solid read, with only minor spelling and grammar errors; very impressive for what I'm assuming is a first VN for a solo creator.
SPOILERS FOR THE END BELOW PLEASE READ THE VN FIRST
.
.
.
.
This first point is a personal preference, but I'd love a content warning/skip option for the cheating scenes. I understand as a writing decision to have it move the plot forward and change the character dynamics. It is just I personally find that kind of explicit content uncomfortable. and would like a bit of a heads up before hand.
My second spoiler point reiterates one of my earlier points; all the drama between the Angel, Mar, and Damian love triangle feels completely unresolved and unexplored. They just go through a major tragic event together and the game ends with a scene of them cuddling.
I've grown to really care for and want to see these characters happy, so to see all the tension involving the cast kind of swept under the rug to just time skip to a happy ending was a bit disappointing in my opinion.
Even with my minor criticisms towards the VN I really hope to see more! Definitely one of my top 5 VNs and I hope you can see my criticisms come out of a place of care and joy for the experience. :)
i hope in the future i can bring more quality stories❤️🔥Thanks for your feedback, it really means a lot to me that you take time to write all that!🥂🙏❤️🔥
So when can other articles be published?I really like your work.Played more than 10 times!I hope to publish other chapters soon.Love you, my brother.😘😚
These next few weeks will be working on a silly mini chapter. It's not gonna be a big thing, but I'll put my heart on it💖 that's what's currently scheduled.
Oh, well, thank you for your reply. I hope that day will come soon. ☺️
Just need at least two more weeks 🤭
I am a Chinese.This is the best visual novel I've ever seen.Although the ending is a little fast.But I can think of some special articles more clearly.When exactly? My brother.
Thanks for your kind words and feedback, bro! More chapters will come, mostly mini chapters and 1 extra chapter in between 😸🙌
Loved the story up until the end. I think the end could have been clearer. I thought something very bad happened until I read posts here saying otherwise.
when I try to play the game ascending to the end they compatible what happened An I Love Play It
Sorry can you elaborate what do you mean? 😅
I try to change See If there any updates so I can update the game but when I didn't see it didn't have any and when I try to play it wouldn't let me cuz shows Mac no updates for Mac game file Show No Mac File Other than that I love the game
You can try uninstalling then install again the latest version🤔
hello! it should work now! Sorry it was a lil button mistake😅 hope you like the chapter!🥰🥰🥰
Are there more than 1 route yet?
There are some decisions that could lead you to a bad ending or good ending.
so no route with the canine?
I'll suggest to try the VN 😅
Simplesmente perfeito.
Thank you for this it made me laugh and cry, truly an unforgettable story that I think everyone should experience. Funnily enough it was the first time I was able to use my second language for anything but a singular class I took in school; it made the whole story even funnier. 😊❤ Thank you again for creating this masterpiece, I am eagerly looking forward to the "fillers"
💖💖💖💖 cheers for more to come! 💦💦💦🥂
Well, i'm a French guy and i really want to express my congratulation for your VN.
My english isn't accurate so, sorry for some mistakes i will do but i wanted to let a comment for your work.
I really love this VN, and this is the first time i'm really invested into a VN.
That was a beautiful experience, with beautifuls characters, and a great story. I really love each parts of this story, i'm happy for them.
Also, i'm looking for the last song we hear, when the MC remember the goods moments, i'm really love it but i don't find it in the google drive.
Well, that's all, i'm waiting so much for others parts you will do.
Congratulation and all my love for Mar, Angel and Damian <3
Awww thanks bro! Sorry I might forgot to update those last sounds! Gimme like 24 hours! Just wanna fix some things!
Don't worry bro, you can take your time, i finally found it in the game's folder, thanks so much for your reply too <3
It's not the complete version! I'll upload today! And notify you here!
Oh, ok, i will wait your update then
Thanks :)
Sorry for the wait! The file is now on the link to songs and is called "Mazapil". the thing is.. I'm not even sure if this song is royalty free 😅 I downloaded that song from a very old video from youtube that disappeared. it was some sort of a tour video from a place called Mazapil. but never find the original source of the song 😅
Awesome! Thanks for sharing :)
It escalated quickly at the end, for sure wasn't expecting it haha reminded a lot of Tacco Crew :P
Waiting for those "fillers"
I have a question for you, will there be a special story for the character xiao because I really hope that he gets his own story where he meets the person he falls in love with who will be the hero of the next story because I really hope for this because I love this huge brown panda even if it takes years I will wait until I get it ❤️ I hope to get an answer
That's a great idea! There are still planned some short stories before that tho 😅
Damn this VN is pure gold!!! I cried a lot last night, reading it non stop!! But it's still worth it to read this vn.
Thank you so much Ari for this masterpiece!! I LOVE IT!!😭🥰😽🫰💖
(Filipino Furry here!👋)
I would love to know about Spanish since Filipinos also have Spanish in some of our languages. But I'm still learning🥹
Awww 💖 🔥 💖 🥰 💖 thanks bro! Cheers for more stories to come! 🥂🥰🥰🥰