Grande ariii lo volvere a jugar jeje,me emocionó un monton la notificación de actualización se agradece mucho volveré a comentar cuando lo haga de nuevo 🤘😎😉
Woooow- the update was really good and helpful and AMAZING 🥰!!!!!im really interested about does helpful tips in the mini chapters im really excited for the next mini chapter updates 🤩🥰 i LOVEE ITT😍!!
Hello again sir Ari it's me again ALEX I came to tell you that I have graduated from college I am now about to get married From my boyfriend Xiao This is the best day of my life He kissed me in front of all the graduating students at the graduation ceremony His family was so happy for us I just want to thank you again for everything you have done for my little brother So I will continue to play your games just like my brother did I hope to talk to you next time I will wait for your new games in the future to try them
Hi, was wondering if this was available in any way on iOS, browser or not, since it’s tagged under “Phone Browser” in the filters, but not seeing any way to access it except via download. Thanks!
O yikes I think once we had the browser watch available, but it messed up a lot with the songs, so we deleted it... I'll check that out😅
About the iOS, iphone products don't allow nsfw content in their Appstore, so it can be seen in that device, sorry, you would need a Mac, windows, Linux or android device to play it😅
I rate this 9.5/10! The story is great and just freaking loved the whole VN. Also I know that there will be side stories that may or may not be involved with the main characters and more so with the world building itself but is there gonna be a part about what happened after the clash with ____________? I mean, I don't know it feels like it ended abruptly. Flashforward and the bam the end. I can't explain it but that's my thought anyway. On the bright side like I said I love it non the less and I mean the size difference it just lovely as always.
Hello sir Ari My name is ALEX I came to tell you About my brother who had cancer He died two weeks after the surgery Before my brother died he told me about you and the games you made You were the reason for making him happy when he was in a state of depression I just want to thank you for everything you've done You made him happy in his last days of his life I will never forget this and I thank you for everything you have done
Woahhh... I'm very sorry for your loss.... The news make me feel terribly sad, but also, I'm happy that this story could have been a little ease in the last days of his great battle, bro... May his soul be resting in a beautiful violet beach with a pleasing warm water .... 🙏💝🕯️ May his soul be happy there, swimming with the playful waves towards a new journey...🕯️🥂🥺💖
My little brother was the last person left of my family Now I'm back in college And I live with my boyfriend This is my last year in college I am about to get married soon after I finish college (I think this is a strange coincidence because my boyfriend name is xiao Also he is a fat man His major in college is computer science) I think my brother wasn't joking when he told me my boyfriend looks like xiao
Yo! Sorry I was very sick all march so there was a big delay . Also mom was in hospital last week, but everything seems to be fine now. I'm a few days away to release for supporters, then after a few weeks it will be released here too! Sorry again for the wait and thanks for being here bro! 😘💖🥰
Hey, i like the vn so far! (im like on 5 minutes of reading it but whatever) but i noticed you wrote settl somewhere in the beggining- im pretty sure that you meanr settle..
Hello again I want to confess something that I have been hiding for a long time I found out a while ago that I have cancer and my chances of survival are very small I just want to tell you that I enjoyed playing your games they made me feel better I just hope to live longer so that I can try the rest of your games in the future I hope so thank you for everything goodbye until next time
I really liked this one! The pacing can be a bit odd starting very fast then slowing down to a more casual pace. Then the ending was also pretty abrupt and, in my opinion, left quite a lot of drama within the story unresolved.
Knowing that there are bonus chapters to be added I really hope to see some kind of epilogue or slight time skip to explore some of the emotional rifts still left in the cast. As well as a few plot points that weren't explored. Especially involving the MC, Mar and his parents.
Overall a pretty solid read, with only minor spelling and grammar errors; very impressive for what I'm assuming is a first VN for a solo creator.
SPOILERS FOR THE END BELOW PLEASE READ THE VN FIRST
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This first point is a personal preference, but I'd love a content warning/skip option for the cheating scenes. I understand as a writing decision to have it move the plot forward and change the character dynamics. It is just I personally find that kind of explicit content uncomfortable. and would like a bit of a heads up before hand.
My second spoiler point reiterates one of my earlier points; all the drama between the Angel, Mar, and Damian love triangle feels completely unresolved and unexplored. They just go through a major tragic event together and the game ends with a scene of them cuddling.
I've grown to really care for and want to see these characters happy, so to see all the tension involving the cast kind of swept under the rug to just time skip to a happy ending was a bit disappointing in my opinion.
Even with my minor criticisms towards the VN I really hope to see more! Definitely one of my top 5 VNs and I hope you can see my criticisms come out of a place of care and joy for the experience. :)
i hope in the future i can bring more quality stories❤️🔥Thanks for your feedback, it really means a lot to me that you take time to write all that!🥂🙏❤️🔥
So when can other articles be published?I really like your work.Played more than 10 times!I hope to publish other chapters soon.Love you, my brother.😘😚
These next few weeks will be working on a silly mini chapter. It's not gonna be a big thing, but I'll put my heart on it💖 that's what's currently scheduled.
I am a Chinese.This is the best visual novel I've ever seen.Although the ending is a little fast.But I can think of some special articles more clearly.When exactly? My brother.
Loved the story up until the end. I think the end could have been clearer. I thought something very bad happened until I read posts here saying otherwise.
I try to change See If there any updates so I can update the game but when I didn't see it didn't have any and when I try to play it wouldn't let me cuz shows Mac no updates for Mac game file Show No Mac File Other than that I love the game
Thank you for this it made me laugh and cry, truly an unforgettable story that I think everyone should experience. Funnily enough it was the first time I was able to use my second language for anything but a singular class I took in school; it made the whole story even funnier. 😊❤ Thank you again for creating this masterpiece, I am eagerly looking forward to the "fillers"
Sorry for the wait! The file is now on the link to songs and is called "Mazapil". the thing is.. I'm not even sure if this song is royalty free 😅 I downloaded that song from a very old video from youtube that disappeared. it was some sort of a tour video from a place called Mazapil. but never find the original source of the song 😅
I have a question for you, will there be a special story for the character xiao because I really hope that he gets his own story where he meets the person he falls in love with who will be the hero of the next story because I really hope for this because I love this huge brown panda even if it takes years I will wait until I get it ❤️ I hope to get an answer
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Grande ariii lo volvere a jugar jeje,me emocionó un monton la notificación de actualización se agradece mucho volveré a comentar cuando lo haga de nuevo 🤘😎😉
Gracias broooooooo 🤗
Woooow- the update was really good and helpful and AMAZING 🥰!!!!!im really interested about does helpful tips in the mini chapters im really excited for the next mini chapter updates 🤩🥰 i LOVEE ITT😍!!
UWUFFF! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈
Whoo, whoo, how long will it take?🥺🥺
Seems like within a few days an update will be ready!
Hello again sir Ari it's me again ALEX I came to tell you that I have graduated from college I am now about to get married From my boyfriend Xiao This is the best day of my life He kissed me in front of all the graduating students at the graduation ceremony His family was so happy for us I just want to thank you again for everything you have done for my little brother So I will continue to play your games just like my brother did I hope to talk to you next time I will wait for your new games in the future to try them
😭💖😭💖😭💖😭💖💖💖💖of course bro!!!
Hi, was wondering if this was available in any way on iOS, browser or not, since it’s tagged under “Phone Browser” in the filters, but not seeing any way to access it except via download. Thanks!
O yikes I think once we had the browser watch available, but it messed up a lot with the songs, so we deleted it... I'll check that out😅
About the iOS, iphone products don't allow nsfw content in their Appstore, so it can be seen in that device, sorry, you would need a Mac, windows, Linux or android device to play it😅
OTTER!
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I rate this 9.5/10! The story is great and just freaking loved the whole VN. Also I know that there will be side stories that may or may not be involved with the main characters and more so with the world building itself but is there gonna be a part about what happened after the clash with ____________? I mean, I don't know it feels like it ended abruptly. Flashforward and the bam the end. I can't explain it but that's my thought anyway. On the bright side like I said I love it non the less and I mean the size difference it just lovely as always.
Thanks for the review bro!!!
Hello sir Ari My name is ALEX I came to tell you About my brother who had cancer He died two weeks after the surgery Before my brother died he told me about you and the games you made You were the reason for making him happy when he was in a state of depression I just want to thank you for everything you've done You made him happy in his last days of his life I will never forget this and I thank you for everything you have done
Woahhh... I'm very sorry for your loss.... The news make me feel terribly sad, but also, I'm happy that this story could have been a little ease in the last days of his great battle, bro... May his soul be resting in a beautiful violet beach with a pleasing warm water .... 🙏💝🕯️ May his soul be happy there, swimming with the playful waves towards a new journey...🕯️🥂🥺💖
My little brother was the last person left of my family Now I'm back in college And I live with my boyfriend This is my last year in college I am about to get married soon after I finish college (I think this is a strange coincidence because my boyfriend name is xiao Also he is a fat man His major in college is computer science) I think my brother wasn't joking when he told me my boyfriend looks like xiao
OH MY DOG NO WAY!!! WHAT A CUTE COINCIDENCE!!!🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
absolute cinema all the way through this is one of the only storys to ever make me cry in a goodway
Cheers for more of those stories !! 🥂 🙌💖 Thanks for your kind words,💖💖💖
How much longer, man? I can't wait.🥺🥺
Yo! Sorry I was very sick all march so there was a big delay . Also mom was in hospital last week, but everything seems to be fine now. I'm a few days away to release for supporters, then after a few weeks it will be released here too! Sorry again for the wait and thanks for being here bro! 😘💖🥰
Oh, okay, I will wait until that day. I hope you will be better and better.😘😘😘
thank you broooo🥰🥰
Omg ari i love your pfp im obsessed 😍
Hehe thanks! me too 🥰🥰🥰 seems like the only time I do art for myself is when I do a gift 🤪🤭
Hey, i like the vn so far! (im like on 5 minutes of reading it but whatever) but i noticed you wrote settl somewhere in the beggining- im pretty sure that you meanr settle..
Thanks! Gonna check it out! 🫡💖
and also you typed rol somewhere when they were in the lobby if i remember, its role:3
Thanks! 🙌
How long will it take? I can't wait. I hope it will be finished soon.😘😘Come on, thanks for your hard work.
Eh... 😅Sorry I was sick for literally an entire month😵 this one might take some more while...🤧
Oh, my God, what's going on? Is your condition all right? I hope you feel better soon. Then take a good rest and don't worry.
Don't worry, take a little time to cultivate yourself.😊😊I wish you get better and better.
Thanks!now on April I have been feeling so much better!
Hello again I want to confess something that I have been hiding for a long time I found out a while ago that I have cancer and my chances of survival are very small I just want to tell you that I enjoyed playing your games they made me feel better I just hope to live longer so that I can try the rest of your games in the future I hope so thank you for everything goodbye until next time
Aww bro I'm sorry to hear that😔I hope for the best of scenarios🙏🙏🙏
and thanks a lot for your kind words 😽
This keeps getting better & better & I can't wait for more
💪🙌🥂🥰
I really liked this one! The pacing can be a bit odd starting very fast then slowing down to a more casual pace. Then the ending was also pretty abrupt and, in my opinion, left quite a lot of drama within the story unresolved.
Knowing that there are bonus chapters to be added I really hope to see some kind of epilogue or slight time skip to explore some of the emotional rifts still left in the cast. As well as a few plot points that weren't explored. Especially involving the MC, Mar and his parents.
Overall a pretty solid read, with only minor spelling and grammar errors; very impressive for what I'm assuming is a first VN for a solo creator.
SPOILERS FOR THE END BELOW PLEASE READ THE VN FIRST
.
.
.
.
This first point is a personal preference, but I'd love a content warning/skip option for the cheating scenes. I understand as a writing decision to have it move the plot forward and change the character dynamics. It is just I personally find that kind of explicit content uncomfortable. and would like a bit of a heads up before hand.
My second spoiler point reiterates one of my earlier points; all the drama between the Angel, Mar, and Damian love triangle feels completely unresolved and unexplored. They just go through a major tragic event together and the game ends with a scene of them cuddling.
I've grown to really care for and want to see these characters happy, so to see all the tension involving the cast kind of swept under the rug to just time skip to a happy ending was a bit disappointing in my opinion.
Even with my minor criticisms towards the VN I really hope to see more! Definitely one of my top 5 VNs and I hope you can see my criticisms come out of a place of care and joy for the experience. :)
i hope in the future i can bring more quality stories❤️🔥Thanks for your feedback, it really means a lot to me that you take time to write all that!🥂🙏❤️🔥
So when can other articles be published?I really like your work.Played more than 10 times!I hope to publish other chapters soon.Love you, my brother.😘😚
These next few weeks will be working on a silly mini chapter. It's not gonna be a big thing, but I'll put my heart on it💖 that's what's currently scheduled.
Oh, well, thank you for your reply. I hope that day will come soon. ☺️
Just need at least two more weeks 🤭
I am a Chinese.This is the best visual novel I've ever seen.Although the ending is a little fast.But I can think of some special articles more clearly.When exactly? My brother.
Thanks for your kind words and feedback, bro! More chapters will come, mostly mini chapters and 1 extra chapter in between 😸🙌
Loved the story up until the end. I think the end could have been clearer. I thought something very bad happened until I read posts here saying otherwise.
when I try to play the game ascending to the end they compatible what happened An I Love Play It
Sorry can you elaborate what do you mean? 😅
I try to change See If there any updates so I can update the game but when I didn't see it didn't have any and when I try to play it wouldn't let me cuz shows Mac no updates for Mac game file Show No Mac File Other than that I love the game
You can try uninstalling then install again the latest version🤔
hello! it should work now! Sorry it was a lil button mistake😅 hope you like the chapter!🥰🥰🥰
Are there more than 1 route yet?
There are some decisions that could lead you to a bad ending or good ending.
so no route with the canine?
I'll suggest to try the VN 😅
Simplesmente perfeito.
Thank you for this it made me laugh and cry, truly an unforgettable story that I think everyone should experience. Funnily enough it was the first time I was able to use my second language for anything but a singular class I took in school; it made the whole story even funnier. 😊❤ Thank you again for creating this masterpiece, I am eagerly looking forward to the "fillers"
💖💖💖💖 cheers for more to come! 💦💦💦🥂
Well, i'm a French guy and i really want to express my congratulation for your VN.
My english isn't accurate so, sorry for some mistakes i will do but i wanted to let a comment for your work.
I really love this VN, and this is the first time i'm really invested into a VN.
That was a beautiful experience, with beautifuls characters, and a great story. I really love each parts of this story, i'm happy for them.
Also, i'm looking for the last song we hear, when the MC remember the goods moments, i'm really love it but i don't find it in the google drive.
Well, that's all, i'm waiting so much for others parts you will do.
Congratulation and all my love for Mar, Angel and Damian <3
Awww thanks bro! Sorry I might forgot to update those last sounds! Gimme like 24 hours! Just wanna fix some things!
Don't worry bro, you can take your time, i finally found it in the game's folder, thanks so much for your reply too <3
It's not the complete version! I'll upload today! And notify you here!
Oh, ok, i will wait your update then
Thanks :)
Sorry for the wait! The file is now on the link to songs and is called "Mazapil". the thing is.. I'm not even sure if this song is royalty free 😅 I downloaded that song from a very old video from youtube that disappeared. it was some sort of a tour video from a place called Mazapil. but never find the original source of the song 😅
Awesome! Thanks for sharing :)
It escalated quickly at the end, for sure wasn't expecting it haha reminded a lot of Tacco Crew :P
Waiting for those "fillers"
I have a question for you, will there be a special story for the character xiao because I really hope that he gets his own story where he meets the person he falls in love with who will be the hero of the next story because I really hope for this because I love this huge brown panda even if it takes years I will wait until I get it ❤️ I hope to get an answer
That's a great idea! There are still planned some short stories before that tho 😅
Damn this VN is pure gold!!! I cried a lot last night, reading it non stop!! But it's still worth it to read this vn.
Thank you so much Ari for this masterpiece!! I LOVE IT!!😭🥰😽🫰💖
(Filipino Furry here!👋)
I would love to know about Spanish since Filipinos also have Spanish in some of our languages. But I'm still learning🥹
Awww 💖 🔥 💖 🥰 💖 thanks bro! Cheers for more stories to come! 🥂🥰🥰🥰