In chapter 7, background music is Guzheng cover of a song from the 1986 Chinese TV series Journey to the West, performed by Carol Chang. The song actually tells a story of forbidden affection and heartbreaking parting between a monk and a queen.
I'm a little curious about whether this story will evolve into two people redeeming each other. Maybe in the future dialogue, the otter will say to the angel: Did someone tell you that you are a real angel? It brought dawn to my dark world and saved me from chaos and degeneration. As the angel said to the otter: you know, I love you not only because of your appearance, but because you have an invisible courage and the life I yearn for. I'm looking forward to the next story more and more：）
Heyo! ^^, always love reading xour new updates, Heat Source is soops cute~! :3
I'd like to make a suggestion regarding the part where the MC and Angel are walking to his room, if xou don't mind?
LP's aren't normally pro "pick me up", actually, it really annoys them. However! Mar is the "Shelter me" type and all about being manhandled :p sooo might I suggest that xou at least acknowledge most little people don't like being picked up? Xou could say something like:
"I know most dwarves don't like being babied, but I could really get used to Angel fawning over me all the time~"
Just a suggestion! ^_^" keep doing what xou're doing because we love it~ n_n/
I L.O.V.E T.H.I.S!! even tho there's many misspellings or typos... but its still understandable... cuz english is not ur main language i understand that cuz im the same... but as they say "practice makes perfect" so keep up the good work ^_^v
Que rápido se me a pasado la build, de verdad que me encanta esta VN, llevo leyéndola desde la build 1 y no me decepciona, ya quiero ver el tour de la habitación de Ángel 7w7
Hola! una disculpa, al parecer para android no viene automaticamente esa opción como se ve en PC (No. se. por. que. XD) PERO! Justo ahora un amigo me resolvió tu duda y me ayudó con el código! Para mañana en la noche creo que podría estar listo ese detalle en una version 0.7.6! Estaré trabajando en unas correcciones de ortografía y la version con la función "Hide" para poder apreciar totalmente la imagen en mitad de juego!
Oooh, ya veo, pues muchas gracias, ya estoy deseando leer lo que se viene OwO, me encanta tu trabajo, sigue así, pero no olvides tomar tus descansos UwU
Daw Angle's so adorable now, making the decision hard to choose when it come to the route. Beside that I'm loving the whole new improving art style, hope to see more in the future.
hewoo! sorry, you might have catched me exactly on the moment i was actualizing the monthly update for the new released build 0.7 just about an hour ago n.n' XD you can check it out already !! UWUWU
no more than 2 days I guess... Normally each build is done by the end of the month after the newest build is released for patreons, but this month's build is extra juicy, so it's taking a little longer this time ;p
Buah bro, te has superado con el rediseño de ángel, antes ya me llamaba la atención, pero ahora? Ahora ES PERFECTO, de verdad tío, felicidades, sigue así que aquí se va a hacer una comunidad muy buena (Te hablo en español porque aún sabiendo inglés me expreso mejor en mi lenguaje y porque sé que también es el tuyo :P)
I love the fact that the novel has a bit of hispanic accuracy and that it includes a bit of spanish into the story, to be honest when damian got a bit protective and caring he made me melt from the cuteness, i hope this game goes swiftly and gains popularity
oww thank you bro! You know, a big revamp is coming up and well, now that I'm free forever of stupid school, this story will have a lot more stuff in the next builds! nwn
What makes Mar think that Damian is straight the man has been flirting with him the whole time they've know each other , like Mar is so dense that light is bending around him. Also I can't deal with the fact that one of the characters is called ocean/sea(I don't know the difference between them). Love the game.
well, so far it's supposed to be linear, no choices planned(so far) and about romance with one or another, I think we can expect anything to this point 😅
Hello! sorry you got that error, it seemed that Linux users were having troubles when unpacking the zip files and that "ñ" character was causing a mess, so in the newest builds (0.6.1+) this "ñ" characters are not longer used in the coding for avoiding these troubles! n_n' I invite you to dowload the latest build now that has been updated some minutes ago! uwu
Thanks! Some bros are helping me for grammar check, sorry I'm Mexican x'D but if you ever wanna make any advice, feel free to tell me! ;) Twitter@Ari_Guardian or ari.guardian.hdz@gmail.com!
Ari, he notado que aún estando en la bulid 0.5 en la imagen principal de la VN sale la 0.4, solo quería que solo supieses por si lo habías pasado por alto
I... think it could be a spoiler to answer that right now, though the main character indeed is having interest in Damian... And about rutes... the story is meant to be linear (as far as it has been planned). The things that might happen in the future will be based on a single timeline, no choices or rutes. I hope maybe this answers your questions n.n'''
As the story is not being written in my native lenguage, and I barely started coding some months ago, right now its kinda difficult to plan multiple alternate universes heheh n.n''''''''''''''''''''''''
A quick bug report: On Linux, I got an in-game error when the file "D_o_ceño.png" was trying to be read. After looking at the game files, that file appears to have been renamed at some point to "D_o_ce�o.png (invalid encoding)", and the tarball (.tar.bz2) file itself appears to contain a file named "D_o_ce�o.png". I was able to rename the decompressed file to the correct name just fine on my end, so the issue may have been with the "ñ" character being unsupported either by the tarball (the .tar.bz2 file) or by some filesystem that was used before the file was compressed.
If the issue can't itself be directly fixed, renaming the file to something that doesn't use the "ñ" character should keep others from having the same issue as a workaround.
mmmm .. that's a hard one 😅 I have been working along last semester on school, so I guess I could go faster now that I'm free, but I can't definitely say exactly how many more updates this will have... But someone could say the story is just beginning, right?😋😅
This game is really cozy and sweet. It's quite cold right now where I live, and through the experience of reading this I felt a bit warmer! looking forward to what comes next with this :3
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The music and ambient sound effects are surprisingly immersive. Good work keep it up bro!~
YEAHH ÙWÚ THANKS BUDDY!!
In chapter 7, background music is Guzheng cover of a song from the 1986 Chinese TV series Journey to the West, performed by Carol Chang. The song actually tells a story of forbidden affection and heartbreaking parting between a monk and a queen.
Holy yikes this is so cool! 🥰🥰🥰💖💖💖
I'm a little curious about whether this story will evolve into two people redeeming each other. Maybe in the future dialogue, the otter will say to the angel: Did someone tell you that you are a real angel? It brought dawn to my dark world and saved me from chaos and degeneration. As the angel said to the otter: you know, I love you not only because of your appearance, but because you have an invisible courage and the life I yearn for. I'm looking forward to the next story more and more：）
Devlog of 0.9.1?
Indeed ;3
Pienso que Damián usa demasiados mexicanismos, aqui de donde soy tampoco decímos uno en cada frase pero igual es mi fav jaja.
como pueden vivir vidas vacías sin chilaquiles?
imposible heheh
SPOILER
Usually I think that the sex scenes of most VNs are a bit 'meh', but seeing this last update got me reeeeally surprised bahaha
Both by the "make love" details and by the "daddy" thingy BAHAHAHA that last part got me a bit WTF (they're almost the same age...)
hshshshhsh Upsidupsi n//w//n
Play for the first time. I fail in English, I have to try to use online translation😭😭
psst! A trick that I sometimes use is download the VN on PC,
then using my cellphone with Google Translator App>
activate "camera translation" and chazam! Visible translation in real-time! Hope it's useful n.n
oh nice!!
is that an app?
U can use Traductor-U if you play on android
ooh K ty :D
Great update, really loving this Vn. Keep up the good work
thankies! n.n7
0.8 update was MAGICAL ✧･ﾟ・゜． ｡･ﾟﾟ
super romantic, informative, and hot as all hell 🔥
I hope it was worth some humidity down your groin 😋💖🤭🥰😅
Heyo! ^^, always love reading xour new updates, Heat Source is soops cute~! :3
I'd like to make a suggestion regarding the part where the MC and Angel are walking to his room, if xou don't mind?
LP's aren't normally pro "pick me up", actually, it really annoys them. However! Mar is the "Shelter me" type and all about being manhandled :p sooo might I suggest that xou at least acknowledge most little people don't like being picked up? Xou could say something like:
"I know most dwarves don't like being babied, but I could really get used to Angel fawning over me all the time~"
Just a suggestion! ^_^" keep doing what xou're doing because we love it~ n_n/
heyoo thanks for the suggestion, tho I think MC is really enjoying being carried by Angel, and big guys in general huh? 🤭
I know I would~ U///U
updateupdateupdate
Asdfgasdfg ÙWÚ
Can't wait for the update I'm loving this game
uwuuuuu glad you enjoy it so far Ùwú
the juicy build 0.8 is gonna be public in about 6 days!
hehe keep up the amazing work and keeps are ^^
Ùwú7
I L.O.V.E T.H.I.S!! even tho there's many misspellings or typos... but its still understandable... cuz english is not ur main language i understand that cuz im the same... but as they say "practice makes perfect" so keep up the good work ^_^v
Heyoo glad you like this story so far Ùwú
If you would like to share any corrections I'm all for it! Indeed, im not good enough at English yet hihihih n.n'
Que rápido se me a pasado la build, de verdad que me encanta esta VN, llevo leyéndola desde la build 1 y no me decepciona, ya quiero ver el tour de la habitación de Ángel 7w7
owó 🥰 creo k es la build más cachonda que tiene esta historia hasta el momento ùwú
Por cierto Ari, sabes si pondrás un botón de 'Hide' para... Apreciar mejor el futuro tour por la habitación de Ángel 😏?
PD: Al menos yo que juego en Android no tengo ningún botón de 'Hide', no sé si en la build de PC lo tenga
Hola! una disculpa, al parecer para android no viene automaticamente esa opción como se ve en PC (No. se. por. que. XD)
PERO! Justo ahora un amigo me resolvió tu duda y me ayudó con el código! Para mañana en la noche creo que podría estar listo ese detalle en una version 0.7.6! Estaré trabajando en unas correcciones de ortografía y la version con la función "Hide" para poder apreciar totalmente la imagen en mitad de juego!
Oooh, ya veo, pues muchas gracias, ya estoy deseando leer lo que se viene OwO, me encanta tu trabajo, sigue así, pero no olvides tomar tus descansos UwU
Gracias hermOso! la nueva update 0.7.6 debería estar lista aproximadamente dentro de una hora ;d
Daw Angle's so adorable now, making the decision hard to choose when it come to the route. Beside that I'm loving the whole new improving art style, hope to see more in the future.
*Whisper: Can we have threesome wink wink UwU*
Owó that sounds like an interesting scene to look 💖💖
Guilty as charged! (˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧
jsjsjjs >w<
First time seeing this VN, looks interesting but where's the download button?
hewoo! sorry, you might have catched me exactly on the moment i was actualizing the monthly update for the new released build 0.7 just about an hour ago n.n' XD
you can check it out already !! UWUWU
Hahaha well that's pretty good timing on my part! Looking forward to giving it a go!
heheh ;d hope you like this new build! uwu
when is the next update coming out?
no more than 2 days I guess... Normally each build is done by the end of the month after the newest build is released for patreons, but this month's build is extra juicy, so it's taking a little longer this time ;p
Buah bro, te has superado con el rediseño de ángel, antes ya me llamaba la atención, pero ahora? Ahora ES PERFECTO, de verdad tío, felicidades, sigue así que aquí se va a hacer una comunidad muy buena (Te hablo en español porque aún sabiendo inglés me expreso mejor en mi lenguaje y porque sé que también es el tuyo :P)
uwu aprecio mucho tus palabras hermano! me alegra mucho que te gustó tambien este rework ;D vamos x mas! >:}
LOVE angel's redesign, an already a hot bear made even hotter o///o
also has even more emotion sprites too? the arms wide one is my fav when picking up our tiny main character so wholesome <3
i knouuuuu right? Uwuwuwuw arms open is my favorite too assfagfahsdfags
Oh, our darling bear got a redesign? I like it a lot! Can't wait to see it in game! :)
UWUUU HOPE U LIKE IT nwn
Oh, yes. I like it a lot.
Can’t wait for the next update nwn I know this will be awesome 🤩
UPDATED! UWU
Hello, ari-guardian. I like your game very much. I translated it into Chinese. Do you need me to send you a Chinese version?
798674867@qq.com You can email me if you need
emailed ;d
emailed,too! uwu
I love you Dev for making this game😍,keep it up🔥
Can't wait for next update
I love the fact that the novel has a bit of hispanic accuracy and that it includes a bit of spanish into the story, to be honest when damian got a bit protective and caring he made me melt from the cuteness, i hope this game goes swiftly and gains popularity
oww thank you bro! You know, a big revamp is coming up and well, now that I'm free forever of stupid school, this story will have a lot more stuff in the next builds! nwn
I love this game
What makes Mar think that Damian is straight the man has been flirting with him the whole time they've know each other , like Mar is so dense that light is bending around him. Also I can't deal with the fact that one of the characters is called ocean/sea(I don't know the difference between them). Love the game.
Em jogo é muito bom gostei muito da história espero que continue^-^
glad you liked it bro! 💖🥰💖🥰✨
Enjoying this. A lot.
A very cute VN. Quite short but I liked it, and the art is simply amazing. The beginning was a little fast paced for me, but overall it is great.
Btw, are the dog and the bear (I'm sorry I forgot their names) romance routes ? Or is this a linear VN with only one partner (the bear) ?
well, so far it's supposed to be linear, no choices planned(so far) and about romance with one or another, I think we can expect anything to this point 😅
ayo, this is the best visual novel i played!! i smiled all the time in the shower scene lol
OWWWWWWWWWWWWW😭💖🥰💖💖 THANKS FOR YOUR KIND WORDS BUDDY!
Hello! sorry you got that error, it seemed that Linux users were having troubles when unpacking the zip files and that "ñ" character was causing a mess, so in the newest builds (0.6.1+) this "ñ" characters are not longer used in the coding for avoiding these troubles! n_n' I invite you to dowload the latest build now that has been updated some minutes ago! uwu
never knew that letter would cause such a mess xD
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that some of your grammar is off in chapter 2 - 3
:3
Thanks! Some bros are helping me for grammar check, sorry I'm Mexican x'D but if you ever wanna make any advice, feel free to tell me! ;) Twitter@Ari_Guardian or ari.guardian.hdz@gmail.com!
Hey, no problem man, I love helping, and your VN is great, I'm surprised you actually replied, I am now following you on twitter <3
Thanks! Uwuu
Ari, he notado que aún estando en la bulid 0.5 en la imagen principal de la VN sale la 0.4, solo quería que solo supieses por si lo habías pasado por alto
oh, cierto, debo cambiar esa imagen 😅
Pero esa es la build 0.5, de eso sí estoy seguro! 😉😋
Eso sí, la leí cuando la sacaste, me gustó mucho la verdad 😏
Sigue así 😜👌
Ùwú gracias bro! n.n7
The game is great so far and im curious if this game will have routes ESPECIALLY for Damian :3 but yeah the game is great so far, just a little short
I've got a question: Will Damian be a love interest? Will he have a route?
I... think it could be a spoiler to answer that right now, though the main character indeed is having interest in Damian... And about rutes... the story is meant to be linear (as far as it has been planned). The things that might happen in the future will be based on a single timeline, no choices or rutes. I hope maybe this answers your questions n.n'''
As the story is not being written in my native lenguage, and I barely started coding some months ago, right now its kinda difficult to plan multiple alternate universes heheh n.n''''''''''''''''''''''''
A quick bug report: On Linux, I got an in-game error when the file "D_o_ceño.png" was trying to be read. After looking at the game files, that file appears to have been renamed at some point to "D_o_ce�o.png (invalid encoding)", and the tarball (.tar.bz2) file itself appears to contain a file named "D_o_ce�o.png". I was able to rename the decompressed file to the correct name just fine on my end, so the issue may have been with the "ñ" character being unsupported either by the tarball (the .tar.bz2 file) or by some filesystem that was used before the file was compressed.
If the issue can't itself be directly fixed, renaming the file to something that doesn't use the "ñ" character should keep others from having the same issue as a workaround.
hey Theris, thanks so much for notifying this bug! I'll try to upload as soon as possible a version without the letter ñ on the code!
hewoo buddy! can you please contact me via twitter(@Ari_Guardian) or gmail (ari.guardian.hdz@gmail.com)?
I'm going to download this game it should ben fun so brazilian l won't understand anything but it will be worth it :)
Hey would you be able to tell me how long do you intend this VN to be? Like how many updates it'll take til completion perhaps?
mmmm .. that's a hard one 😅 I have been working along last semester on school, so I guess I could go faster now that I'm free, but I can't definitely say exactly how many more updates this will have... But someone could say the story is just beginning, right?😋😅
Oh of course I just wondered if you have an estimate of how long you WANT it to be
M... I guess I would want it to be no more than 9 months- a year to be completed ;)
This game is really cozy and sweet. It's quite cold right now where I live, and through the experience of reading this I felt a bit warmer! looking forward to what comes next with this :3
DAWWWWWWW 💖💖🥰 I cried a little uwuwuw glad you liking this so far! Next build 0.5 will be released within some hours!! n.n
OMG NO WAY IM SO EXCITED!
Is this game finished?
nope, the story is being updated monthly😅