Hi Ari ! I just finished the latest update on Patreon, and I have to say that even though I really enjoyed the story. And that the whole "paradise" scene was really sublime. There are still negative points (for me) to this ending.
For example...
-Did the story really needed a "boss fight" to be concluded?
-Mar personal story arc with his family who ultimately doesn't lead to anything and that in addition the fact that he lied to Angel about calling his parents is never mentioned again and it has no consequences.
-Currently the choice system is useless since if I select all the wrong answers, the game forces me to redo the previous choices and that's it. It would be cool to have several endings. For example a bad ending where Mar definitively loses Angel's love and trust because we made the wrong decisions. Another where they manage to reconcile. And a last one with Damian included in their relationship with a new question, when they are in the bedrooms, whe can have the choice between telling him that we must definitively end our "relationship" or telling him that we also have feelings for him.
-Why is there a time skip that ends on the ending image with Mar Angel and Damian? I mean so much must have been happened for all 3 of them to end up together so why end like that? Yes there will be bonus chapters, but there could have at least been an additional chapter "aftermath" before the ending screen to tell everything that happened after the confrontation. Because even if I know that you put a lot of effort into this chapter, there is always this feeling that there is something missing for the story to really be concluded..
Even if personally I am a little disappointed with the end. I want to repeat that I really liked your story and I congratulate you for having managed to finish Heat source ^^
I really like xiao, looking forward to many slots about him. It’s hard not to seriously suspect that he is in the closet. Really grateful for Guardian's game, excited for the next part of the story and more new games.
I just finished the game and I really liked it lol, but I honestly expected more choices to be honest, many directions could change if they had to choose like Damian's case, but it's okay for now I'm honestly curious how this will unfold, if there will be an outcome as it progresses because of this episode 28, which one should I choose? And if I can simply run away and stay with none, after all a lot of the mess was made by me haha
Im not being rude or anything and i loved reading this But HOLY SHIT. During when Angel and MC have sex for the first time its honestly hilarious how you hear the sounds of a lovely lyre in the background while you have angel saying "You make a great sleeve" Its just so comically out of place that i cant stop laughing at it
I don't speak English and I use a translator: I can't find the link for the latest released update (Android version). If I try to download from the page announcing the release of the update, it asks me if I want to download the entire game again. I'm probably not understanding something, can someone help me?
Hello! You can find the download buttons in yellow in this page : https://ari-guardian.itch.io/heat-source choose a file depending on your device (android, Windows, Mac or Linux) 😉
You can also try deleting the current game on your phone and install it over again, you can still use the chapter select button to jump into the part of the story you want !
Where is the discord? I want to know to, I tried a few different combinations and nothing changed. It seems kinda redundant to give us choices if they don't change anything .3.
Yes, sorry I'm delayed from the usual bimonthly update! This next chapter is BIG! About 30 new illustrations have been made and there's still a few to finish! I believe the next update could be ready within a week! 🥂🤩🔥🔥🔥
Asdfgahhg me too ! New CGS for chapter 29 have been made at a rhythm of 2-3 per day! 🤩🤩🔥🥂💖 Seems like it could be completed within a week, maximum 2 weeks! 😅
About the last days of october-first week of November! Sorry its delayed from the usual bimonthly update, it's just, September was almost all wasted cuz I was in other state helping relatives and a lot of things going on😖 also, next chapter is BIG! 💖🔥🥰
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My dream finally come true after many chapter, best update ever.
PS: Gonna go crying in the bed now.
Omg Ari this chapter was beutiful, I loved it so much <3 <3 <3
BRO IM CRYING, THE BEST NOVEL I'VE EVER READ FOR 3 YEARS, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS MASTERPIECE, I LOVE YOU WORKS, ARI <333
Got bored waiting for short horns vn so i downloaded this one and it was awesome please use Damián character more hehe he's so cute tho
Ari did get you sick?your are not answering as usual.
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Hi Ari ! I just finished the latest update on Patreon, and I have to say that even though I really enjoyed the story. And that the whole "paradise" scene was really sublime. There are still negative points (for me) to this ending.
For example...
-Did the story really needed a "boss fight" to be concluded?
-Mar personal story arc with his family who ultimately doesn't lead to anything and that in addition the fact that he lied to Angel about calling his parents is never mentioned again and it has no consequences.
-Currently the choice system is useless since if I select all the wrong answers, the game forces me to redo the previous choices and that's it. It would be cool to have several endings. For example a bad ending where Mar definitively loses Angel's love and trust because we made the wrong decisions. Another where they manage to reconcile. And a last one with Damian included in their relationship with a new question, when they are in the bedrooms, whe can have the choice between telling him that we must definitively end our "relationship" or telling him that we also have feelings for him.
-Why is there a time skip that ends on the ending image with Mar Angel and Damian? I mean so much must have been happened for all 3 of them to end up together so why end like that? Yes there will be bonus chapters, but there could have at least been an additional chapter "aftermath" before the ending screen to tell everything that happened after the confrontation. Because even if I know that you put a lot of effort into this chapter, there is always this feeling that there is something missing for the story to really be concluded..
Even if personally I am a little disappointed with the end. I want to repeat that I really liked your story and I congratulate you for having managed to finish Heat source ^^
I really like xiao, looking forward to many slots about him. It’s hard not to seriously suspect that he is in the closet. Really grateful for Guardian's game, excited for the next part of the story and more new games.
I just finished the game and I really liked it lol, but I honestly expected more choices to be honest, many directions could change if they had to choose like Damian's case, but it's okay for now I'm honestly curious how this will unfold, if there will be an outcome as it progresses because of this episode 28, which one should I choose? And if I can simply run away and stay with none, after all a lot of the mess was made by me haha
Ahhh 😅 I think it's a little bit too early to post this here bro 👉👈
Don't you wanna talk about this in the discord server, patrons' channel? 😅😅😅😅😅
Oh yea sorry, i just thought more comments on the itch page then more comments for people to see and realize how good the game is. My bad
Im not being rude or anything and i loved reading this
But HOLY SHIT. During when Angel and MC have sex for the first time its honestly hilarious how you hear the sounds of a lovely lyre in the background while you have angel saying "You make a great sleeve"
Its just so comically out of place that i cant stop laughing at it
Now you're making me laugh at that line too 🤣
nice vn im in a depreesive rut and havent felt anything in a long long while this story actually made me smie for the fist time in too long so thx ari
I'm very moved to hear your words 🥰I wish you feel better💖
Hello! You can find the download buttons in yellow in this page : https://ari-guardian.itch.io/heat-source choose a file depending on your device (android, Windows, Mac or Linux) 😉
You can also try deleting the current game on your phone and install it over again, you can still use the chapter select button to jump into the part of the story you want !
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because I got confused what made Don go lumberjack-angry, that it made me subscribe to your Patreon 🤣
Hehe 🤭🥰thanks for your support bro! I haven't seen you!
Again, your pfp and name is so damn CUTE 🥰
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Ari wtf was that?! It's freaking crazy! I didn't expect that
😅
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Dam man, don herman is crazy, i hope damian and mar can escape from him, it was just a head in a belly, and then he wanted already to kill his son
😖😅
Eres genial, Ari ✌🏻
uwuff!! gracias hermano! 🤩💖🥰🥰😁
I loved this new att, because I was finally able to use my translator lol now I can follow all the chapters :)
Yeiiiii 🥰🥰🥰🥰
I gotta say, the choice you made there was nerve-wracking for me because I only have one path that I really want to see it make through to the end.
Awww 🥹🥰💕🥰💕
WHAT DO YOU MEAN CHOOSE WISELY!?!?
NOTHING CHANGED!!
😭😭😭😭😭
Do the choices we make change any sort of outcome???
I'm so confused and sad and I just love Damien
I can tell you more of what the choices do on the spoilers channel on discord 🤭😈😅
Where is the discord? I want to know to, I tried a few different combinations and nothing changed. It seems kinda redundant to give us choices if they don't change anything .3.
Hello! They do change some thing by the end of the chapter 🤫 You can find the discord link on the "Socials & songs" section on the main menu 🙌
can’t waittt 🔥🔥
I hope the next update is soon ari 😇
Uwufff!!! 💖 There's a high chance tonight it gets completed! 🔥🔥🔥💖🥰
wooowww hope you are doing ok and take your time buddy 🔥
It will be ready in about an hour!
i think i’m cooked duuude 😭😭
I look forward to the next chapter
yo! Within ~24 hours I think next chapter could be ready! 🔥🔥🔥
Oh god it's already November, so excited to read the new build next week
Next chapter is just some drawings away to be completed! 🥰🥰🥰💦💦💦💦
Ari your going to update right?.... right
Yes, sorry I'm delayed from the usual bimonthly update! This next chapter is BIG! About 30 new illustrations have been made and there's still a few to finish! I believe the next update could be ready within a week! 🥂🤩🔥🔥🔥
Dios como amo esta VN es tan erotica y la diferencia de tamaño me vuelve loco OWO
😈😈😈🥰🥰🥰 Y espérate a lo que viene... 🔥🔥🔥
Can't wait for the bois again
Asdfgahhg me too ! New CGS for chapter 29 have been made at a rhythm of 2-3 per day! 🤩🤩🔥🥂💖 Seems like it could be completed within a week, maximum 2 weeks! 😅
ari whats the date for the next update?
About the last days of october-first week of November! Sorry its delayed from the usual bimonthly update, it's just, September was almost all wasted cuz I was in other state helping relatives and a lot of things going on😖 also, next chapter is BIG! 💖🔥🥰
🙂can't wait to see it !!!
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Yeah!!
😋🤭💖🔥🔥🔥💦