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故事很棒,代入感强,我开始期待接下来的发展了。中文版好像慢了一章。

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你好!抱歉拖了这么久!我建议志愿翻译者等待另一个版本的出现,因为代码将会改变,如果一行代码被移动,他们就需要移动所有内容,这就是原因。这只是为了提高质量!感谢您的耐心!我很荣幸你喜欢这个故事!🥰🥰🔥🔥🥰

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Thank you so such for a wonderful story and emersion! I can’t wait to see what happens next!

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I'm excited for it too 🤭

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Another build worth of waiting 🫂🥰

Your words are incredibly satisfying bro! 🥰🥰🥰

Update when!!?? I'm waiting here like I'm waiting for my dad back with the milk!!!

This next one is big! Its scheduled by the end of October😅

Wow! That was... an update! :D
Wonderful work as always, Señor Ari!

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Is the MC a bottom?

yes

this vn is so adorable and cute , im glad that boyahboyah recomend this vn love it already

Uwufff!! 💖🔥🥰😈

There's gonna be new chapter in this week 🥺🥺

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Hello! The bimonthly schedule is gonna take longer this time cuz next chapter is BEEG! It should be finished during middle- last week of October.  sorry in advance for the wait😅

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I feel bad dropping this vn a few updates ago.. the recent content is top tier lol

Probably because I found angel kinda boring, but i still feel bad for him now..

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Agreed, Angel can be kind of a nerd sometimes, but hey, he still got a lot to show in the next chapters🥰

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Ari the new update is so juicy 🤭, I really really love how the plot is and Pandora is so bad luck 😭, and i really love how you did the animation and the stuck thing, i really super love your vn so much❤️

I think im obsessed 🙈😳🫢

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I might be obsessed too 🤭🥰💖🔥💦💦

Thanks for making this.  The NSFW is fun but the story is appreciably good.   Looking forward to more.  

What a gentleman 🥰♥️💖 of course there will be more🙌🔥🔥💦💦

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THIS IS WILD!!. . . . anyways this might scar me for a while but it is too damn juicy (story AND otherwise) to leave be.  .  . I will stay tuned. Keep up the great work.

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🥰🤘🙌🔥🔥🔥💦💖

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I can't believe I just woke up at 4am to reread the last scene

you better start making longer updates from now on Ari, I've never been impatient about something like this before.

just wish if i can buy sub in patreon.

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I happy this story brings you such interest. I guess this means it's a nice ride to jump on 🥰

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Oh dear, this really took a turn.

Somehow I managed to miss 3 chapters without noticing, that's a little embarrassing... And damn Damian's father is a terrible person. Really hopping that his mother can escape just like his sister did. 

Xiao really trying to blow this hotel into rubble, like executives do, so nothing new under the sun there. At least he saw one of his many mistakes (I know I'm really giving him all the hate, but damn I have no mercy for abusive bosses)

Doctors really see that shirt every day, do not be embarrassed to tell everything 😉.

And damn those dogs are horny, if there was not a family house I can imagine the thing that could happen there (I will make no apology for that mental image)

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Damn Mar, really? Lying that much in just weeks of a relationship?! You better tell the truth, ALL of it. Do not hide one thing. You get point for saving Xiao but damn you better come clean.

Thanks for the update, see ya next time 

(Fingers crossed to have a polyamory option)

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Literally all of this!! I'll also join you in keeping our fingers crossed

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the latest chapter made me hate the MC. Ari you gotta fix this! Anywayyy~ DRAMAAAAA~

ps: sorry i just hate cheaters ಠ⁠_⁠ಠ

Pps: y'all might misinterpret my statement above. what i meant is they gotta fix this hate that i am feeling towards the MC. *eherm* redemption arc *eherm*

peace yall

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X2,  as same as the previous chapter

ya i wanna bonk him in every part of his body lol

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Ayoooo wtf was that, that was too short!! i finished it in half an hour i was waiting a whole two months for this, and after things just gotten exiting u hit me with (to be continued...). I can't bear another two months, I can't doit it's painful, I request access to the next chapter!!! PLSSSSSSS

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I admit it, it's shorter than the average😳 but you know what? The next one is about double than the average 🤯

Also there was a super complex assortment of cgs and animations in this one. That counts too!🥺

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I understand it was a lot of work and u did a great job, I was a bit emotional, idk what you're going through but you kept your promise by updating the game in time and every update is better than the other, I give my sincere apologies for being selfish and childish. Keep it up you and your bf

Yeah, it was short, but loaded! What a ride!!

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Arii why would you do that!? That smile! God damn it ! Omg I'm speechless, thanks for the hard work Ari ❤️

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Uwufff!! You're welcome 🫡💖😈🔥💦😘

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Omg its here ♥️ im super excited for damian!

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Have some lube and paper ready 😏😏

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SPOLER

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I'd love to tell the truth to Angel and be able to have a relationship with both Angel and Damian ;-;

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Ariiii 🫴

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JAJAJAJAJAJJAJA

SO LITTLE TEXT, SO MUCH ENERGY, SUCH A CONCRETE MESSAGE 🤣🤣🤣🤣

is coming up in about less than a week ;)

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Yes please I know you have a big surprise ❤️

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Ahhhh the July is coming! And august! I know your plan Ari🙌🏽 keep going ❤️

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I'm loving this story! Do you plan on doing anything with Kerub?~~

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there will be some more of Papa Kerub! 

(Also, there's fan service on patreon!) 🥰🔥🐻

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I love the game question though is xiao gay??

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Wow this might be a turrrrrbo mayor spoiler

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Canonically no, but fan service art can go far uwu I have many lewd unholy illustrations of him on Patreon hehe

nooooou T^T  lol

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*******      S P O I L E R   A L E R T !      *******



I had to reread the last chapter to refresh things, and boy, Quetzali made me cry again 😑

Poor Damian, he's such a good boy, he doesn't deserve that, but neither Angel... I hope they eventually reach some kind of... settlement that satisfy all of the parts involved 😅

I laughed for several minutes at that underwear frenzy 🤣🤣🤣

BTW, Tito is hot as fuck!

This is turning better and better by the time! Can't wait to see what's next! 😁

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YEIIIIIII ADHDGAFAGFJJAHDGJA 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

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🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥰

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Ari the new update is so romantic and its soo gooddd🤤💦 and about damian he is so gentleman towards mar and i love itt ✨ can't wait for what coming next update i really love your art and vn ari❤️

Thankssss in always down for hearing you guy's opinion 🥰🥰🥰

Your welcome ari, your the bestt!? 🔥❤️

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OMG! so many encountered feelings in this chapter because after Angel, Damian is my second favorite character in this VN. Tbh, I didn't quite like the cheating part in this chapter, but I really loved how Damian lets his feelings/emotions open towards MC. He doesn't deserve to suffer I hope.

Por cierto,  me encantó lo sexy y bonito que se ve Xiao en traje. Que gran adición!!

Omg the "little puta"??What does that mean? I kinda know its like a swear word like something hahaha

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Yup it means "sex worker woman " xd

XD never expected the meaning of it haha

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OMG this chapter is worth the wait! , I love the CGs so much 🤤😖😍 I'm super excited to the upcoming updates UwU < 3

Question! 


Im so confused about the chapters. did I missed an update? because there's two chapters that is new to me. I just finished reading chapter 26  But it shows that chapter 27 is new chapter but i can't open it 😭   I dont know if im dumb or something. Im on mobile btw

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Yup I fucked up, the second line shouldn't be there 😅🤭

The latest chapter available is only  26"certain growls"

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Its okk! Besides I ENJOYED the new chapter so muchh!!❤️❤️❤️

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🥰🥰🥰🔥🔥🔥🔥💦💦💦

Ari I guess the next chapter will release by the of Aug? Or probably First week of September? Right?

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About last week of July ;)

Wow that's really fast Ari looking forward to it no pressure 

Two months is fast? 😅 I thought I was a slowpoke hehehe

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OMGGGG!!! Each new chapter is better than the last. How are you making such fantastic updates?!?! I love this VN even more more 😍😍 Please never stop 🫶

That's very sweet🥰💖 cheers for even more🍻😁🙌

Yeahhhhhhh new chapter!!!!😍

🥰🥰🙌😊💖🔥🔥🔥💦

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Wait since when were there extra patreon scenes? I must've missed a dev log or smth, do we have a list of those scenes and at which point they are in the story? 

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I was curious myself so compared the scripts. The added images are in:

- Chapter 5 (shower piss at cabin)

-Chapter 16 (pool bj & Damian dream)

- Chapter 17 (shower bowling stackup)

- Chapter 21 (pool sex, animated!)

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Yey new chapter! 









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ayye such a roller coaster of emotions

mi corazon, mi amorế

Even I got a headache from Mar's dilemma ;

Should he choose the rich hero that saved his life? Or choose the friend of his hero? But either choice will make you appear as a *extremely small font* "puta

I really hope that they could get together and have a threesome every-now-and-then but Angel's personality is really good and it hurts me to see him suffer if he does not like the truth.

And Damian is  just <3 .

Anyways I really trust that everything will be alright in the future chapters

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AWWWWWWWWWWWW the little puta part xD

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Also I LOVE YOUR NAME AND PFP ❤️ ❤️ 🥰 ❤️ 🥰 ❤️

Thanks Ari 😍 and coming from you, its really an honor 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

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So so CUTEEEE 🥰

hihi xD

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Full of surprise Ari ❤️ love it so much I really appreciate your work 🫂 10 out 10


Holly shit! DAMÍAN!!!!! 

Holy shit indeed x3

finally, an update!!

Update update update

Um I don't understand Damian I don't know what he's speaking and i kinda want to learn it but i dont know what he's speaking /;

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It's okay! The phrases that are in other languages are not exactly important. Context is always given by other text 😉

But you know Ari I'm interested what damían said on other language I want to know as well what he said :>

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I thought its going to release in the end of may?

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As soon as new chapter is done, it will be released ;🫡 I guess it won't take more than 3 days 😉

Great! Thanks boss 😃 

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possible spoiler/question










is tito coming? o-o

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You mean cumming? 🤭🥰😋🙌

I need to see damián ari 

Me tooooo x3

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